I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Cooper, I like all of the pictures you have used. I also like going to the beach. Maybe you shouldn't share your last name because people can figure out where you are. Your last name is private. Bye, From TM1
Hello cooper, YOu did a good job of writing your blog, I like the tag writing you did for 'dog'. I think you wrote a bit too much about private information on your blog, you put your full name. From:Mikayla
Hi Cooper! Me and Lucy really like the picture of You in the tent and the Flamingo floatie. we also like Fish and Chips and we like horses! Did you think about Editing your blog so then you don't share Private Information like your last name? Anyways,Bye!
Hi Cooper Erika and I like the pictures of the horses and flamengo. Try to remember not to share your last name.You did a good job of your blog. We like going to the beach too!
Hi cooper. I like the picture of you and your friend. Rayan likes the picture of the beach. do you think you should have included your last name?When you are ready you might want to fix it.We enjoyed looking at your blog. From Riley and Rayan
Hi Cooper.It's Pippa from Hornby Primary School.I like the picture of the horses.I like the picture of the sand and the beach with the sunglasses on it.Did you check with your mum and dad before you posted your blog because you have shared your last name and that piece of information is private?What shop did you buy your fish and chips from as they look yummy!
Greetings cooper its oakley and jailah from hornby primary school.oakley likes the photo of the hourses jailah likes the photo with the flamingo. me and jailah like swimming.cooper you put some private information in your blog post.like your full name.does eany one see eany a ther private information
Hey Cooper its Kushla and Marleigh from Hornby Primary school.I like the photo of the horses I like horses to.Did you know that you made a mistake on Home Country on your second about me. Hows your day going
Hi it's Zainab and Risha from Wigram Primary School It's really cool how you love going to the beach on a weekend. I think you may of shown to much private information
Hi Cooper its Leon and Steven from st bernadetts I like how you described yourself by picking pitures I did the same thing as you too. why did you write private stuff? from Steven and Leon
Hello Cooper,it's Cameron Izza from st Bernadette's school I like how you put your nickname. We also learnt that you are from New Zealand. I notice that you shared your birthday can you please fix that.Did you know that you shared private information Can you please fix that because people could know where you are. do you like ponies?
Hi Cooper this is Angela and Isabella We really like how you used amazing picture's because your friends seem very playful I noticed that you used something really private.
Hey Cooper it's Raquel and Phoebe from South Hornby School. We like your all about me because you gave it a lot of effort. We also learnt that you should not share private information. Did you realise that you put some private like your'e last name there information on your blog post? Sometimes people make mistakes just stick with the personal information (were not being mean by the way just saying). Why did you put some minty leaves in your picture?
hi cooper it's Lennox and Cole we like that you added the things you like but maybe next time don't put you're last name so then if people see you in real life they won't know it's you
hi it is Ashaswi cooper.In the first cube of a photo u wrote ur full name and I think that u should not post privet stuff. Well u can put ur first name cuz there r lots of dogs with the same name but about ur last name. I think that u should post ur last name cuz that's privet
kia ora cooper you should not post like your birthday I think be for you post I think you are posting a lot of private safe on your blog I think you should not post a lot from gilberthorpe school by Marsali
kia ora copper its Wiar question before you post a blog you need to think before you post because you have to mach of personal thing like,your last name and your birthday.Thats is a little to mach personal things that you have posted you need something like your first name which you already have done which is good.Try what I said ok.
Hey Coop! My name is Daisy from gilberthorpe school. I think that you should be more careful about what you put on your blog! Next time you should not put private info, you should put personal info! I don't think you know the difference of private & personal info, so I am going to tell you! Private info is like your last name & your phone number and parents names! Personal info is your best high score so that you can challenge others to bet it! how in the world can you use a computer?
you are just like dog with a blog
ReplyDeleteHi Cooper,
ReplyDeleteI like all of the pictures you have used. I also like going to the beach. Maybe you shouldn't share your last name because people can figure out where you are. Your last name is private.
Bye,
From TM1
Hello cooper, YOu did a good job of writing your blog, I like the tag writing you did for 'dog'. I think you wrote a bit too much about private information on your blog, you put your full name. From:Mikayla
ReplyDeleteHi Cooper!
ReplyDeleteMe and Lucy really like the picture of You in the tent and
the Flamingo floatie. we also like Fish and Chips and we like horses!
Did you think about Editing your blog so then you don't share Private
Information like your last name? Anyways,Bye!
Hi Cooper Erika and I like the pictures of the horses and flamengo. Try to remember not to share your last name.You did a good job of your blog. We like going to the beach too!
ReplyDeleteHey Cooper,
ReplyDeleteI think the pictures on your blog looks cool. Maybe you should not write
your full name.
from Harry and Henrik.
Hi cooper. I like the picture of you and your friend. Rayan likes the picture of the beach. do you think you should have included your last name?When you are ready you might want to fix it.We enjoyed looking at your blog. From Riley and Rayan
ReplyDeleteHi Cooper.It's Pippa from Hornby Primary School.I like the picture of the
ReplyDeletehorses.I like the picture of the sand and the beach with the sunglasses on it.Did you check with your mum and dad before you posted your blog because you have shared your last name and that piece of information is private?What shop did you buy your fish and chips from as they look yummy!
Greetings cooper its oakley and jailah from hornby primary school.oakley likes the photo of the hourses jailah likes the photo with the flamingo.
ReplyDeleteme and jailah like swimming.cooper you put some private information in your blog post.like your full name.does eany one see eany a ther private information
Hey Cooper its Kushla and Marleigh from Hornby Primary school.I like the photo of the horses I like horses to.Did you know that you made a mistake on Home Country on your second about me. Hows your day going
ReplyDeleteHi it's Zainab and Risha from Wigram Primary School
ReplyDeleteIt's really cool how you love going to the beach on a weekend.
I think you may of shown to much private information
Hi Cooper its Leon and Steven from st bernadetts
ReplyDeleteI like how you described yourself by picking pitures
I did the same thing as you too.
why did you write private stuff?
from Steven and Leon
Hello Cooper,it's Cameron Izza from st Bernadette's school
ReplyDeleteI like how you put your nickname.
We also learnt that you are from New Zealand.
I notice that you shared your birthday can you please fix that.Did you know that you shared private information Can you please fix that because people could know where you are.
do you like ponies?
Hi Cooper this is Angela and Isabella
ReplyDeleteWe really like how you used amazing
picture's because your friends seem very playful
I noticed that you used something really private.
Hey Cooper it's Raquel and Phoebe from South Hornby School. We like your all about me because you gave it a lot of effort. We also learnt that you should not share private information. Did you realise that you put some private like your'e last name there information on your blog post? Sometimes people make mistakes just stick with the personal information (were not being mean by the way just saying). Why did you put some minty leaves in your picture?
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ReplyDeletehi cooper it's Lennox and Cole we like that you added the things you like but maybe next time don't put you're last name so then if people see you in real life they won't know it's you
ReplyDeletehi it is Ashaswi cooper.In the first cube of a photo u wrote ur full name and I think that u should not post privet stuff. Well u can put ur first name cuz there r lots of dogs with the same name but about ur last name. I think that u should post ur last name cuz that's privet
ReplyDeletekia ora cooper you should not post like your birthday I think be for you post I think you are posting a lot of private safe on your blog I think you should not post a lot from gilberthorpe school by Marsali
ReplyDeletekia ora copper its Wiar question before you post a blog you need to think before you post because you have to mach of personal thing like,your last name and your birthday.Thats is a little to mach personal things that you have posted you need something like your first name which you already have done which is good.Try what I said ok.
ReplyDeleteHey Coop! My name is Daisy from gilberthorpe school.
ReplyDeleteI think that you should be more careful about what you put on your blog!
Next time you should not put private info, you should put personal info!
I don't think you know the difference of private & personal info, so I am going to tell you! Private info is like your last name & your phone number and parents names! Personal info is your best high score so that you can challenge others to bet it! how in the world can you use a computer?